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XXX中學的XXX校長﹕
素聞 貴校校風淳樸，辦學嚴謹，懷作育英才之抱負，致力推動德、智、體、群四育。我仰慕 貴校的辦學理念， 貴校學生知書達禮，才藝兼備，教師教導有方，我十分欽佩。
我資質實屬不差，勤奮好學、平易近人。在學業方面，我成績優異，尤其在中、數兩科最為顯著，亦曾在這兩科目中獲得多項獎狀，例如，在中文散文獨誦取得優良的成績；另一方面，我對英文科最為感興趣，曾參加英語話劇、劍橋英文試高班等。
我不但專注成績，而且熱愛服務及經常參與課外活動，例如:戲劇班、公益少年團、少年警訊、校內風紀服務、小老師服務及義工服務等等。我將於明年九月升讀中學，冀盼能入讀貴校，接受全人教育。
隨函附上我就讀小學之成績單及個人資料，懇請察閱。如蒙貴校給予入讀機會，我定當勤奮向學，謹遵校長與老師之諄諄教誨，日後貢獻社會，為貴校爭光，以報悉心栽培之恩。
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XXXX年X月X日
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We are writing to apply for an admission opportunity for our son, Tom xxxxxxx, to your good school. Tom is now studying in xxxxxxxPrimary School. Like most parents in Hong Kong, we are facing a challenge in selecting a suitable secondary school for our son. We have visited your school during the school open day in March. We are impressed by the students academic achievements & the confidence shown in their demonstration of the result of their hard work. Surprisingly, Tom, just a primary five student showed his interest in participating in the various games arranged by your students. When we left your school, Tom told us that he has decided to try his best to get into ABC Secondary School.
From March till now, Tom has been working on his own initiative and he did prove his desirability of becoming your student. Not only did he get a remarkable result for the school examination, he also managed to obtain a reference letter from his Principal. We therefore enclose his schools academic reports and the said reference letter for your consideration and hope that you would return us with an application form and grant Tom an opportunity for interview.
Thank you for your kind attention and in case you need further information, please give us a call at 9999999(Father) or 96666666 (Mother).
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