國際學校嘅 creative writing skill

KIMLIFEINUK

我可以同大家分享一下我嘅經驗, 睇下大家覺得啱唔啱用。

我個女細個嘅時候都係讀國際學校。佢嘅學校唔係特別優勝，比較起上嚟其實我覺得都好淺。

我記得佢小學嘅時候，大約一個星期有一次默書，英文生字大約有十個字左右，但係因為一個星期先有一次，所以其實我覺得學到嘅生字唔算多，而且十個字裏面有好多時有三、四個字係特別淺，一早已經識。

我覺得個情況就好似係叫你自己搞掂，如果靠學校去學vocabulary, 基本上就係寥寥數字。莫講乜野creative writing.

我嗰陣買好多書畀佢睇，好彩佢當其時細個都好鍾意睇書，甚至乎有時候一日可以睇到一至兩本書，噉當然啲書並唔係好厚嘅。暑假嘅時候, 最高紀錄甚至一個月可以睇到30本書。

我而家覺得閱讀嘅習慣其實好重要，當時佢係小學嘅時候，我好難去比較，識到佢有啲同學係好鍾意睇書，但係有啲同學就唔係咁睇書，當其時大家嘅水準差唔多，亦都好難講睇書與否嘅幫助有幾大。

但係一兩年過去之後，你就好明顯睇到個分別好大，好鍾意閱讀嘅同學，佢哋嘅寫作同埋vocabulary有好大的進步。同嗰啲唔睇書嘅同學個距離其實拉咗好遠。

當然唔係個個細路仔咁鍾意睇書，而家年代嘅青少年，可能會比較喜歡用電腦多過睇書，甚至有好多唔同嘅娛樂，真係肯攞起一本實體書嚟睇，其實係要家長不斷嘅鼓勵同埋培養

KIMLIFEINUK

Babyarsene 發表於 22-8-20 18:15
想問吓啲生字卡喺邊度買㗎？係for y5/6?

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Babyarsene

KIMLIFEINUK 發表於 22-7-6 17:52
當佢到到year 5 同埋 year 6 嘅時候, 我就開始幫佢去溫生字卡, 我叫佢每日最少要記十個生字, 包括生字嘅串 ...

想問吓啲生字卡喺邊度買㗎？係for y5/6?

glo000

KIMLIFEINUK 發表於 22-7-6 17:50
我可以同大家分享一下我嘅經驗, 睇下大家覺得啱唔啱用。

我個女細個嘅時候都係讀國際學校。佢嘅學校唔係特 ...

同意！我女都大個了，Y8仲好鐘意睇書，2歲時開始堅持擺個大書櫃在廳，ikea 8格四方格果隻，打橫四格，兩層果種，放晒佢愛的書，花好多心思在佢的reading corner 上，隨手有書攞到黎睇，間中換下位，慢慢愛上閱讀

BlossomAlmond

KIMLIFEINUK 發表於 22-7-23 21:02
pls see it here:

thanks

tyson715

我都同意樓主，其實做咩都係日子有功，積少成多。本人小朋友讀書量也不少。理解能力也不錯。但對於佢既寫作能力，暫時仍然觀察中，好多時候，佢既寫作，我都必需推佢一把。作文能寫出比較滿意的句子。由於現時學業尚較輕鬆，所以暫時都係順其自然。

KIMLIFEINUK

pls see it here:


marking scheme


hope it works now

BlossomAlmond

KIMLIFEINUK 發表於 22-7-23 07:47
個 marking scheme 係我圖冊內分享出來，我自已見到，唔知其他人見唔見到？

睇唔到

KIMLIFEINUK

個 marking scheme 係我圖冊內分享出來，我自已見到，唔知其他人見唔見到？

aquada13

KIMLIFEINUK 發表於 22-7-6 23:37
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呢個圖好好，多謝分享！睇唔到個marking scheme，可以再upload多一次嗎？Thanks!

KIMLIFEINUK

This is quite a common marking scheme among schools in uk.
U will have a total of 15 marks

10 from communication and organisation +
5 from vocabulary etc


Teacher will then choose "a band" in right hand side column as well as one from the left hand side column. Adding both marks up and that will be the total.

It is interesting to know the marking of creative writing can be quite precise like that.

My daughter just got her exam paper back, hence I was curious to know how this works.

Student will also be able to understand why and how marks were deduced according to this marking scheme. I think this is a good idea.

KIMLIFEINUK

Share with you here a marking scheme for Year 8 English writing (uk)
Pls note band 5 means the highest mark here, band 1 means the lowest tier.

KIMLIFEINUK

同大家分享吓一個簡單既 technique

可以 practice 令簡單普通既句子變成多姿多彩的文筆。

---------> Descriptive language

例如叫小朋友先作一句簡單既句子：

an elephant is eating grass

叫小朋友加D adjective 令句子加長：

The big elephant is eating fresh grass


替代 simple adjective to 一些佢可能少用或更漂亮既同義詞：

The huge elephant is eating sweet fragrant grass


咁己經唔同哂，靚仔哂
........


再加埋 sign, touch, emotion, sound, taste, smell

句子現在演變成：


The huge (sight) elephant sat in the warm (touch) sunshine contentedly (emotion) crunching (sound) the sweet (taste) fragrant (smell) grass.

呢D都係 creative writing 常用既 technique

小寶貝兒

KIMLIFEINUK 發表於 22-7-6 23:37
Share 呢個 emotional wheel, 用來寫故事角式人物既情感幾有用

呢張圖好正啊！要share比阿女  

KIMLIFEINUK

Raccch 發表於 22-7-7 16:31
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剛剛阿女見到emotional wheel話啲色好靚好吸引，而且上面好多字自己都未識用。佢 ...

Haha 太好了！
咁我而家就係 feeling optimistic and inspired.

(happy 果格啊）

Raccch

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剛剛阿女見到emotional wheel話啲色好靚好吸引，而且上面好多字自己都未識用。佢好開心

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Raccch 發表於 22-7-7 10:44
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多謝分享個圖好有用等我打印出黎俾阿女。我女雖然不是讀國際學校，只是 ...

好乖啊！

其實我覺得什麼語言既書本都好，能夠培養到閱讀既習慣真係無價！

其實學習可以好有趣味，我自己到今天都不停學下新知識，人大左反而好想追求更多的新知識，我成日同D細路講，其實可以 full time 去學習，是一種幸福

Raccch

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多謝分享個圖好有用等我打印出黎俾阿女。我女雖然不是讀國際學校，只是剛剛好路過睇到post。不過佢由上小學開始就好喜歡睇書，由於英文故事書比較多同吸引，所以基本都係睇英文書為主，依家經過幾年累積+返咗一年英文寫作班，我都覺得佢閱讀同寫作能力好大提升，不過我就未開始要佢串字。

BlossomAlmond

KIMLIFEINUK 發表於 22-7-6 23:37
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