如何篇寫履歷表，自薦信，Portfolio

easiness

Dear Gongonma :


could I have a copy of the profile sample for applying primary school ????

thanks
e-mail [email protected]

Teresa

以下之自薦信樣本希望能幫到各位！部份是BK之媽咪send比我，若閣下發覺文章有欠流暢，請自行刪改！


Miss Wong
The Principal
XXXXXXX School

Dear Miss Wong,

We are very grateful and appreciative of you spending precious time in reading this unexpected letter of ours. The main purpose of this letter is to take this opportunity to introduce our son/daughter to you.

Our son/daughter, XXX has applied to your school for P1 admission next year during the Discretionary Phase. We are highly impressed by your School Motto – to be humble, mutual respect, hardworking, positive philosophy, independent thinking. Similarly, the team of brilliant teachers who have nurtured the students towards academic and moral excellence has greatly motivated us. As such, we are very keen for him/her to become a student of your esteemed school. We have selected your school for the Discretionary Phase (Application Form No. XXX, number XXX), and have already decided that if we should fail, we will definitely try again in the Central Allocation Phase and subsequently thereafter.

XXX is currently studying in the whole day upper class of XXX Kindergarten. He/She enjoys reading and music very much. Our son/daughter is honest, independent and has a bright character, with a strong sense of curiosity which we encourage. He/She has won school awards for School Competition of English Chirography, Chinese Chirography and other competitions in the school.

In order to balance XXX’s developments, he/she attends Piano Course in Tom Lee Music and English Phonics Course in Bauhinia Association. We also often bring him/her to family activities organized by the community organizations, the school and our family in order to broaden his/her horizon and to encourage his/her independent thinking.

We would be appreciated if we could be given an interview (anytime) with the Principal for further clarification and we sure that the Principal could obtain a more comprehensive understanding of our son/daughter.

Enclosed, please find a copy of the application form, curriculum vitae and copies of awards, certificates, academic reports and photos for your consideration,

Thank you for your kind attention.

Yours sincerely,


_____________________________
XXXXXX



Your Address:


Date:

Mr./Mrs XXX
The Princple
XXX Primary School


Dear Mr. XXX,

Highly impressed by the whole-person education and the brillant teachers of your school, which have been nurturing students of both academic and moral excellence in the past ?? years, therefore, on behalf of our son, BBB, we would like to apply for the admission to Primary One (or Primary Two).

Educated in YYY Kindergarten, BBB performs especially well in Chinese and English, satisfactorily in other subjects. He has a bright character, a strong curiosity, and a love for reading and music. At the school's talent show this year, he even received an award in the Volin performance.

In order to balance BBB's development in all aspects, My husband and I often accompany him to participate in many family activities organized by our community orgainizations to broaden his horizon, to foster his knowledge in our society, and to encourage his independent thinking and expression of ideas.

We wish the best for our child's development and earnestly hiope that BBB could recieve a high-quality education from you school, meanwhile, he coulc enjoy a happy school life.

Enclosed are a completed application form and copies of the relevant documents for your review. We look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,


_______________
MMM

Attachment : 1 application form, 1 copy of the academic report and 1 self-address envelope.

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XXX : Principle
BBB : Your son/daughter name (applicant)
YYY : The name of kindergarten
MMM: Your name



Rosaryhill School (Primary School) Your Address
No. 41-B, Stubbs road,
Hong Kong
September 6, 2000.

Attn : Mr. Lau Wai Ming, Principal of the School


Re : Request for Application Form for 2001 Primary One Class


With complete sharing on the spirit of the School Badges - to be humble, hardworking, pure and truthful, we hope our daughter, Miss ________________ could pursue on this right track. Certainly, the best way we hope _____ could achieve this goal is to let her become a student of your esteemed school.

As _______ is our first child to attend the Primary School, we should be grateful if you could accept our apologies for this unexpected letter. While there may be further arrangement such as testing, interview, or examination that would be coming up in the next few months, we would appreciate if you could provide us with a copy of the relevant Application Form in the meantime.

Kindly find enclosed a copy of _________’s Birth Certificate and a returned envelope for your perusal.

Should you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact us at ___________.

With warm regards,


Yours truly,

_________________________



Dear Principal,
Please excuse me for this unexpected letter expressing the eagerness of mine and my son/daughter for the education offered by the XXX Primary School.
My son/daughter and I are very much impressed by the education offered by your school which stresses a balanced and all-rounded development of one’s potential. The school is so renowned for its academic and extra-curricular activities standing that all parents would like to have their children educated in such a sounding environment. I attribute the success solely to the devotion and enthusiasms by the Principal and every members of the school. The XXX really makes a difference.
I am sure my son/daughter will obtain great benefit if he/she is with the XXX. And follows his/her own initiative in learning and being diligent. Though he/she might not have done as well as others, he/she is likely to show great progress if some form of enlightenment is given by someone who is a real educationalist. Moreover, my son/daughter started playing the piano last year and has attained the stage II level. His/her talent in this area is likely to be developed further as the XXX has an excellent reputation for music.
I would be most grateful if my son/daughter could be given an interview with the Principal so that you may obtain a more comprehensive understanding of my son/daughter. Copies of my son/daughter’s school reports, certificates and testimonials are enclosed for your consideration. Should anything be missing, I can be reached at 12345678 for clarification.
Regards,
Yours truly,
XXXXXXXXXXX

XXXX小學校長：
本人乃陳小明之家長。小兒將於本年九月入讀小學一年級。小兒曾於「自行收生」及「統一派位」兩階段嘗試報讀 貴報，均未如願取錄。現特來函，期盼面提教晦，賜予機會，與小兒進行面試，以便 校長閣下能對他有更深刻認識。
本人一直對 貴校之辦學方針推崇備至，既著重學生的學業，又兼顧學生在課餘的發展，對德育培訓亦重視有加。本人曾多次在公眾場合遇上 貴校學生，他們均表現得謙遜有禮，面上更是充滿好比陽光燦爛般笑容。校長閣下與一眾教職員對教育事業俱有滿腔熱誠，作育英材，實為社會之幸。若小兒有幸獲 閣下惜才，到 貴校接受教育，這對小兒之成長實在有莫大益處。
小兒資質實屬不差，勸奮主動，若能獲得 校長及 貴校老師啟蒙，定必能造出顯著就。在學業方面，小兒尤其在英語朗誦環節；另一方面，小兒亦屬生性好動的弓孩子，熱愛游泳及跑步。素仰 貴校在上述兩方面在歷年學界比賽中均有卓越表現，若小兒能有幸入讀 貴校，小兒在這方面的潛能定能得到悉心栽培。
本人誠懇希望， 校長先生能與小兒作一短談，給小兒賜。隨函附上小兒之成績表，歷年獲頒之獎狀，幼稚園校長對小兒之推薦信副本，敬希 卓裁。若有任何遺漏，煩請 閣下致電1234 5678與本人聯絡。
敬祝
教安
XXXXXXX 謹上
二零零一年X月X日


Profile內如要加入教育子女方式，可參考此段（出自本人手筆，若覺文章欠流暢，請自行刪改！）

對子女的教育方式：
為了令XX勇於表達自己，我會經常與她說喜歡的話題，以及在她感興趣的題目上引導她多思考和表達。表達是溝通的靈魂，要有開放和鼓勵的態度，本人對小女的意見不會批判太多，在討論事情時不會太著重結果，我覺得小朋友與成人溝通相處時，有太多的否定，或經常由父母代表自己發言，會影響她日後表達自己的信心。
除了學業及興趣培養外，在品德培育方面，我亦投放很多時間幫助XX學習獨立、自主、負責任、守規矩、學習尊重別人及如何成為一個備受尊重的人。每天就算多忙碌，我亦會抽時間與子女溝通，了解孩子的內心世界，以便明白孩子所思所想是否正確，從而作出指導和教養。
在處理孩子的情緒時，我會用冷靜和平和的心情，並從小朋友的角度來看問題，然後與孩子傾談，引導他說出自己的情緒和背後原因，另外，平日我亦會留心孩子的情緒變化，作出適當的情緒教育。其次是重視身教，因為如何處理情緒，往往是孩子主要的學習來源。在教育子女方面，我仍處於摸索階段，我會不段努力學習，把女兒培育成未來的社會棟梁。

平日家庭活動：
閑時會與子女前往郊遊、燒烤、遊泳、圖書館及公園等地，亦會前往農場，讓小朋多些接觸大自然.


個人資料：
姓名： XXX
年齡： 五歲八個月
出生日期： 香港

曾就讀學校：
XXX（K.1-K.3）

曾獲獎項：
xxxxxxxxxxx

個人品德：
和順守規，待人有禮，勇於表達意見，學習態度認真.

興趣：
遊泳、踏單車、閱讀、唱歌及跳舞

父母親資料：
父親姓名： XXX
職業： XXX
聯絡電話：XXX
母親姓名： XXX
職業： 家庭主婦

家庭資料：
通訊地址： XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
聯絡電話：XXXX
常用語言： 廣東話、英語、普通話

CKC

Teresa,

Thank you so much!!!

IT04

Teresa,

Thank you very much for sharing all these letters with us!

May66

Teresa,

Thank you!

Hei-Hei

想請問, 用中文 or 英文會好些??

easiness

Dear Teresa:

Thank you very much!