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dubykenny

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In the afternoon of 12 May 2008, an earthquake measuring 8.0 Ms strike Sichuan Province in China. It has claimed the lifes of more than 69,000 residents, with 368,000 injured and tens of thousand still missing.
The 512 Sichuan earthquake has teared apart countless families but destroyed many schools. Huge numbers of teachers and students was killed in piles of rubble from the collapsed "tofu"(unstable)school building. Thousands of childrens who survived the disaster are orphaned and living in despaired.

cluk15hon

In the afternoon of 12 May 2008, an earthquake measuring 8.0 Ms strike Sichuan Province in China. It has claimed the life’s of more than 69,000 residents, with 368,000 injured and tens of thousand still missing.
The 512 Sichuan earthquake has
tore apart countless families but destroyed many schools. Huge numbers of teachers and students was killed in piles of rubble from the collapsed "tofu"(unstable)
school building. Thousands of children who survived the disaster are orphaned and living in despaired.

原帖由 dubykenny 於 09-3-4 21:20 發表
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In the afternoon of 12 May 2008, an earthquake measuring 8.0 Ms strike Sichuan Province in China. It has claimed the lifes of more than 69,000 residents, with 368,000 ...

Unclejt

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In the afternoon of 12 May 2008, an earthquake measuring 8.0 Ms struck Sichuan Province in China. It has claimed the lives of more than 69,000 residents, with 368,000 injured and tens of thousands still missing. The 512 Sichuan earthquake has torn apart countless families and destroyed many schools. Huge numbers of teachers and students were killed in piles of rubble from the collapsed "tofu" (unstable) schoolbuildings. Thousands of children who survived the disaster were orphaned andliving in despair.

[ 本帖最後由 Unclejt 於 09-3-5 05:01 編輯 ]