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本帖最後由 小時了了 於 17-2-13 11:30 編輯
以下係阿女今年考直資時英文部份唯一預先準備及背定的兩題題目內容,其他就靠阿女造化臨場對答發揮喇。
1) Self Introduction (因為自己英文唔好,呢篇都係教友幫阿女寫的, 為尊重教友版權,不便公諸同好了。)
2) Why do you choose our school (St Stephen College)?
Version 1 (俾阿女姑姐及教友睇後話咁講無阿女賣點, 又唔中 point, 之後惟有重作)
I love your school very much. I attended the school's briefing session in November last year. What impressed me most was the size of the school. As the school principal said, the school’s size is similar to the Hong Kong Disneyland. How amazing if I can spend my secondary school life in such a wonderful place.
Moreover, I am a sporty girl, the school has so many sports facilities such as swimming pool, basketball court and football field etc. I can fully and freely play these sport facilities.
At last, I chatted with some senior students on the briefing day and they are so smart, confident and polite. I admired them very much. I do want to be a member of your school.
Version 2 (呢個似自我介紹, 惟有再修改後再重作)
My name is XXX. I am studying at the XXXX Primary School in XXX.
I like reading different kinds of books and novels. I like writing, too. I have submitted my writings to the Cotton Tree Children Literature Digest for sharing with other readers. I won the Young Writers Achievements Awards in 2015 and 2016.
At school, I am so honored to have been selected as a member of both the School's basketball and table tennis team. I joined the table tennis NT North Interschool competition in the past 2 years and our school team got the 2nd runner up in the competition.
During summer holidays, I like joining adventurous and leadership camps, like Outward bound and Gideon young soldier camp. I enjoy being a leader and leading the team to achieve missions.
I would like to join your school, which provides a good atmosphere for me to study and further develop my strength in sports and leadership
Version 3 (Final version)
Hong Kong is an International city, uses not only Cantonese, but also English and Putonghua. The College emphasizes on student’s language performance in English and Putonghua. This will help me to develop toward International and to foster a leader of tomorrow.
I love writing. I had won the Young Writers Achievements Awards. The College has Creative Writing Project which is guided by visiting writers. At school, I joined the table tennis NT North Interschool competition in the past 2 years and our school team got the 2nd (second) runner up in the competition. I would like to join your school to study and further develop my strengths. |
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