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Other than tenses which mamimeow has already corrected it, I have some comments on the wordings of the sentences.
It depends on what you want to say, but "put away" has a meaning of putting it aside for storage or discarding. So, you might want to skip the "away", i.e. Mr. Lee puts his hat on the ground.
And the last sentence, do you mean Mr. Lee picks up his hat from the ground/floor and goes away. |
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