有冇人有申請轉AM班信嘅sample?

super1984

circle0818 發表於 12-6-19 04:51
人地出自好心

I don't offer help to other people very often because I want to make sure that what I am offering is indeed helpful, not harmful.

BBTao

Sorry, 我英文唔好, 所以我唔會再post有關sample出來. 我一心想幫人,但我無想過有D人如此說話, 做人應留有餘地, 而且作為家長的, 應做好榜樣, 身教呀!

super1984

我爸爸常常教我, 害人之心不可有, 防人之心不可無. 這句說話, 我終生受用.

iantsang

版主按 :

懇請大家能保持冷靜討論的氣氛，不要人身攻擊或作出侮辱性的言詞。 如再有不理智的攻擊言論，發言者將被禁言，讓其冷靜一下。

多謝大家合作!

AL1987

It would be the best if parents can draft the letter on their own as every kid is unique and have different difficulties regarding "PM class".  Sample letters are for reference only and cannot be copied word by word, parents need to study the content and of course the use of english carefully.

If parent's english standard is not so good, then it's better to ask friends/relatives to comment/review before sending out the letter.

Addressing "Principal" as "Principle" is an obvious mistake and it can be sure that the Principal would feel that the parents are not so competent in English .... (then how to teach their kids good english at home?).

0505mama

May I have the sample, it is urgent.
Please forward to [email protected]
Many Thanks

super1984

我一直都以為這個帖子會沉落去, 我都費事出聲, 一陣又俾人投訴挑釁, 好麻煩.

這封sample信, 作為奇文共賞, 或者反面教材, 亦無不可. 但若校長收到這封信, 必死無疑.

將Principal ( 校長 ) 串錯為 Principle ( 宗旨 ), 已經好無禮貌.

第一段第一句 " thank you for allowing XXX enters PN.... ", 先別說句子用字 " 論盡 "; Thank you for admitting 已經簡潔好多, 最大問題係, 正確文法應該係allow之後用to enter, allowing XXX enters, enter點可以加s, 文法錯哂. 第一段最後一句, I believe I made a right chose. 講真, 我真係查過下字典, 明明正確串法是choice, 點解會串成chose, 難道chose是一個古字?

至於其他段落, 由於有關人士已將奇文刪除, 無法再討論. 第一段, 由於錯得離譜, 所以我還有記憶.