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其實我都想知道他的用詞如何﹐因為我自己英文普普通通﹐所以不能給予任何指導﹐下面這文字是選自他五歲的時候寫的一篇文章﹐名字叫 A Joke About how the solar system is made
Because of the sun, Jupiter and Saturn’s gravitational pull sucked earth into the second orbiting planet. After ten- thousand years or so, with
earth keep crashing into Jupiter like a Meteor, Jupiter finally swung out of orbit. The dot on Jupiter is a mark that earth was crashing into it. When Jupiter was just one mile out of orbit and earth was the farthest away, it suck Saturn toward
it. When they were 12.14 light days away, there gravitational pull swung mercury and Venus right out of the solar
system. The sun swung them back into orbit a little because they were far away . They swung right between the sun and the earth.
Slowly , Jupiter and Saturn came back into orbit and mercury and Venus became the first two planets in orbit.
而最近一篇文章是一份假期功課﹐他寫了二十頁紙。但已經交上去。就我的觀察﹐用詞和文章的組織方面﹐已經好過這篇文章許多了﹐很有小說的架勢。
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