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學好語言要多聽多講多讀多寫,是不二法門; 而這個次序也是好重要。早教時代應維持多聽多講,入學後才"學閱讀"、小學後就開始寫。不用急,要配合性情。我個仔仍是思想較簡單的,所以寫的故事也好簡單。以下是他在聖誕時寫的故事。
Olive the Reindeer Dog (By Josh at 7)
One hour before Christmas Eve in Greenland there lived a dog called Olive! Olive quickly went to the market to buy food. He saw a chocolate reindeer. Then he thought about Santa Claus. Olive quickly ran th North Pole! He asked Santa, "Can I please be a reindeer?" Santa chuckled,"Yes!" Olive was very happy. So Santa tied a string onto Olive's body and the other end onto the reindeer's neck! Mrs Claus said,"I will make a gingerbreadman parade after you come back."
They were ready to go! Santa said,"1,2,3 let's go!!!" The reindeer flew up, up and away. Along the trip, Santa slept on the sleigh. So they crashed into a tree. Santa woke up all of a sudden. Olive barked. Olive untied the string that were stuck in the tree. At last they went again!!
Part 2
All of the ride was fantastic, Santa gave many gifts. The reindeer said,"We are very hungry and tired!" Then Santa said,"If you're hungry we better faster get back quickly to the North Pole." Ten minutes later they were in the Artic Circle but they didn't move because there was a fog.
Santa asked Olive,"Can you smell Mrs Claus's Gingerbreadmen?" "Yes" said Olive. So Olive brought them back to Santa's workshop. Then Santa gave the reindeer presents. The last present was for Olive. It was his own pair of antlers. Then they ate the gingerbreadmen. At last they played reindeer games with Olive!! |
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