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Re: 報小一時附在報名表的profile點做？
希望以下資料（樣本）可幫到各位：
Miss Wong
The Principal
XXXXXXX School
Dear Miss Wong,
We are very grateful and appreciative of you spending precious time in reading this unexpected letter of ours. The main purpose of this letter is to take this opportunity to introduce our son/daughter to you.
Our son/daughter, XXX has applied to your school for P1 admission next year during the Discretionary Phase. We are highly impressed by your School Motto – to be humble, mutual respect, hardworking, positive philosophy, independent thinking. Similarly, the team of brilliant teachers who have nurtured the students towards academic and moral excellence has greatly motivated us. As such, we are very keen for him/her to become a student of your esteemed school. We have selected your school for the Discretionary Phase (Application Form No. XXX, number XXX), and have already decided that if we should fail, we will definitely try again in the Central Allocation Phase and subsequently thereafter.
XXX is currently studying in the whole day upper class of XXX Kindergarten. He/She enjoys reading and music very much. Our son/daughter is honest, independent and has a bright character, with a strong sense of curiosity which we encourage. He/She has won school awards for School Competition of English Chirography, Chinese Chirography and other competitions in the school.
In order to balance XXX’s developments, he/she attends Piano Course in Tom Lee Music and English Phonics Course in Bauhinia Association. We also often bring him/her to family activities organized by the community organizations, the school and our family in order to broaden his/her horizon and to encourage his/her independent thinking.
We would be appreciated if we could be given an interview (anytime) with the Principal for further clarification and we sure that the Principal could obtain a more comprehensive understanding of our son/daughter.
Enclosed, please find a copy of the application form, curriculum vitae and copies of awards, certificates, academic reports and photos for your consideration,
Thank you for your kind attention.
Yours sincerely,
_____________________________
XXXXXX
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Your Address:
Date:
Mr./Mrs XXX
The Princple
XXX Primary School
Dear Mr. XXX,
Highly impressed by the whole-person education and the brillant teachers of your school, which have been nurturing students of both academic and moral excellence in the past ?? years, therefore, on behalf of our son, BBB, we would like to apply for the admission to Primary One (or Primary Two).
Educated in YYY Kindergarten, BBB performs especially well in Chinese and English, satisfactorily in other subjects. He has a bright character, a strong curiosity, and a love for reading and music. At the school's talent show this year, he even received an award in the Volin performance.
In order to balance BBB's development in all aspects, My husband and I often accompany him to participate in many family activities organized by our community orgainizations to broaden his horizon, to foster his knowledge in our society, and to encourage his independent thinking and expression of ideas.
We wish the best for our child's development and earnestly hiope that BBB could recieve a high-quality education from you school, meanwhile, he coulc enjoy a happy school life.
Enclosed are a completed application form and copies of the relevant documents for your review. We look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
_______________
MMM
Attachment : 1 application form, 1 copy of the academic report and 1 self-address envelope.
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XXX : Principle
BBB : Your son/daughter name (applicant)
YYY : The name of kindergarten
MMM: Your name
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Rosaryhill School (Primary School) Your Address
No. 41-B, Stubbs road,
Hong Kong
September 6, 2000.
Attn : Mr. Lau Wai Ming, Principal of the School
Re : Request for Application Form for 2001 Primary One Class
With complete sharing on the spirit of the School Badges - to be humble, hardworking, pure and truthful, we hope our daughter, Miss ________________ could pursue on this right track. Certainly, the best way we hope _____ could achieve this goal is to let her become a student of your esteemed school.
As _______ is our first child to attend the Primary School, we should be grateful if you could accept our apologies for this unexpected letter. While there may be further arrangement such as testing, interview, or examination that would be coming up in the next few months, we would appreciate if you could provide us with a copy of the relevant Application Form in the meantime.
Kindly find enclosed a copy of _________’s Birth Certificate and a returned envelope for your perusal.
Should you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact us at ___________.
With warm regards,
Yours truly,
_________________________
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Dear Principal,
Please excuse me for this unexpected letter expressing the eagerness of mine and my son/daughter for the education offered by the XXX Primary School.
My son/daughter and I are very much impressed by the education offered by your school which stresses a balanced and all-rounded development of one’s potential. The school is so renowned for its academic and extra-curricular activities standing that all parents would like to have their children educated in such a sounding environment. I attribute the success solely to the devotion and enthusiasms by the Principal and every members of the school. The XXX really makes a difference.
I am sure my son/daughter will obtain great benefit if he/she is with the XXX. And follows his/her own initiative in learning and being diligent. Though he/she might not have done as well as others, he/she is likely to show great progress if some form of enlightenment is given by someone who is a real educationalist. Moreover, my son/daughter started playing the piano last year and has attained the stage II level. His/her talent in this area is likely to be developed further as the XXX has an excellent reputation for music.
I would be most grateful if my son/daughter could be given an interview with the Principal so that you may obtain a more comprehensive understanding of my son/daughter. Copies of my son/daughter’s school reports, certificates and testimonials are enclosed for your consideration. Should anything be missing, I can be reached at 12345678 for clarification.
Regards,
Yours truly,
XXXXXXXXXXX
XXXX小學校長：
本人乃陳小明之家長。小兒將於本年九月入讀小學一年級。小兒曾於「自行收生」及「統一派位」兩階段嘗試報讀 貴報，均未如願取錄。現特來函，期盼面提教晦，賜予機會，與小兒進行面試，以便 校長閣下能對他有更深刻認識。
本人一直對 貴校之辦學方針推崇備至，既著重學生的學業，又兼顧學生在課餘的發展，對德育培訓亦重視有加。本人曾多次在公眾場合遇上 貴校學生，他們均表現得謙遜有禮，面上更是充滿好比陽光燦爛般笑容。校長閣下與一眾教職員對教育事業俱有滿腔熱誠，作育英材，實為社會之幸。若小兒有幸獲 閣下惜才，到 貴校接受教育，這對小兒之成長實在有莫大益處。
小兒資質實屬不差，勸奮主動，若能獲得 校長及 貴校老師啟蒙，定必能造出顯著就。在學業方面，小兒尤其在英語朗誦環節；另一方面，小兒亦屬生性好動的弓孩子，熱愛游泳及跑步。素仰 貴校在上述兩方面在歷年學界比賽中均有卓越表現，若小兒能有幸入讀 貴校，小兒在這方面的潛能定能得到悉心栽培。
本人誠懇希望， 校長先生能與小兒作一短談，給小兒賜。隨函附上小兒之成績表，歷年獲頒之獎狀，幼稚園校長對小兒之推薦信副本，敬希 卓裁。若有任何遺漏，煩請 閣下致電1234 5678與本人聯絡。
敬祝
教安
XXXXXXX 謹上
二零零一年X月X日
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