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本帖最後由 小時了了 於 17-1-12 09:55 編輯
洋蔥頭媽咪 發表於 17-1-11 12:55
唔駛擔心啦,我覺得妳真係一個好好、好稱職嘅媽媽 (講真我絕對冇妳咁勤力)作為家長我地只可以盡 ... 洋蔥頭媽咪, 正如妳所講, 我份人做野比較緊張憂慮, 自己份人比較大壓力, 我做野儘量可以的話會有好多 what if plan. 點解我會呻預備升中面試好傷心神, 好損意志. 因為我及阿女英文唔係咁叻及醒, 諗住會讀及註冊嗰3間直資, 我及C6 真係要每間中學要好多時間作英文點解選呢間學校 (依家只係完成咗赤柱聖士提反呢間咋, 仲有培基及匯基未作) 及阿女要背. 阿女背聖士提反 Version 3 (Final version) 都要用差唔多5日先至背到滚瓜爛熟好似好流利, 但俾阿女背之前嘅所有version, 我及C6作完後要四周圍搵人幫手睇及修改. 唉! 我, C6 及阿女英文唔好, 預備升中面試英文題目都對我哋一家三口來說都幾大挑戰.
P.S. 希望大家不要見笑以下所分享的英文水平, 無辦法, 英文唔好麻, 大家多多包容
Why do you choose our school (St Stephen College)?
Version 1 (俾阿女姑姐及教友睇後話咁講無阿女賣點, 又唔中 point, 之後惟有重作)
I love your school very much. I attended the school's briefing session in November last year. What impressed me most was the size of the school. As the school principal said, the school’s size is similar to the Hong Kong Disneyland. How amazing if I can spend my secondary school life in such a wonderful place.
Moreover, I am a sporty girl, the school has so many sports facilities such as swimming pool, basketball court and football field etc. I can fully and freely play these sport facilities.
At last, I chatted with some senior students on the briefing day and they were so smart, confident and polite. I admired them very much. I do want to be a member of your school.
Version 2 (呢個似自我介紹, 惟有再修改後再重作)
My name is XXX. I am studying at the XXXX Primary School in XXX.
I like reading different kinds of books and novels. I like writing, too. I have submitted my writings to the Cotton Tree Children Literature Digest for sharing with other readers. I won the Young Writers Achievements Awards in 2015 and 2016.
At school, I am so honored to have been selected as a member of both the School's basketball and table tennis team. I joined the table tennis NT North Interschool competition in the past 2 years and our school team got the 2nd runner up in the competition.
During summer holidays, I like joining adventurous and leadership camps, like Outward bound and Gideon young soldier camp. I enjoy being a leader and leading the team to achieve missions.
I would like to join your school, which provides a good atmosphere for me to study and further develop my strength in sports and leadership
Version 3 (Final version)
Hong Kong is an International city, uses not only Cantonese, but also English and Putonghua. The College emphasizes on student’s language performance in English and Putonghua. This will help me to develop toward International and to foster a leader of tomorrow.
I love writing. I had won the Young Writers Achievements Awards. The College has Creative Writing Project which is guided by visiting writers. At school, I joined the table tennis NT North Interschool competition in the past 2 years and our school team got the 2nd (second) runner up in the competition. I would like to join your school to study and further develop my strengths.
最後, 赤柱聖士提反用中文及英文問阿女點解住咁遠住粉嶺都想讀我間學校呀? 其實阿女可以照答背得好似好流利英文嘅Version 3, 但阿女因為太想讀呢間及太大壓力, 竟然草草講唔遠, 有南港島線通車, 我會為入讀你呢間理想中學努力
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