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Re: sjc chatroom
Dear mjzz,
I refer to my suggested amendments sent to you through my email, please further note that 'your' should be used instead of 'our' in the first sentence of second last paragraph. :mjzz 寫道:
有位媽媽(susan lee)mail比我一封信, 我覺得好好, 希望大家比d意見, 如果ok, 不如就決定用呢個版本好嗎? 因為時間緊迫, bbchu可否收集我們的fax no. ? 如果係就開始~
內文:
Dear Principal,
Request for Visitng School Campus
It is an undisputable fact that St. Johannes is well known for its total devotion to
provide the best education and all round care to its students. We, as the parents
of your students, are really proud of being a member of the school.
In order to familiarise with the school deeper and to enhance the cooperation and
bond between the school and us, we stronly request you to arrange a school visit for
us. From the visit, we trust we can learn more about the school, which would
definitely enable us to share the wonderful school life with our children in every
aspect. You are assured that the visit will not impede the normal operation of the
school and every parent takes part in the visit will behave himself/herself.
Since the proposed visit will be beneficial to the students, school and parents, we
wish you will accept our request at our earliest convenience. Looking forwad to
seeing you in the school visit very soon.
Please feel free to contact XXXX at xxxxx for the arrangment.
Yours faithfully,
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