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Re: urgent pls help, I need "knock door" letter!
仲有英文版sample, 不過我覺得呢個sample既英文寫得唔好, 只係用黎參考下好喇.
Miss Wong
The Principal
XXXXXXX School
Dear Miss Wong,
We are very grateful and appreciative of you spending precious time in reading this unexpected letter of ours. The main purpose of this letter is to take this opportunity to introduce our son/daughter to you.
Our son/daughter, XXX has applied to your school for P1 admission next year during the Discretionary Phase. We are highly impressed by your School Motto – to be humble, mutual respect, hardworking, positive philosophy, independent thinking. Similarly, the team of brilliant teachers who have nurtured the students towards academic and moral excellence has greatly motivated us. As such, we are very keen for him/her to become a student of your esteemed school. We have selected your school for the Discretionary Phase (Application Form No. XXX, number XXX), and have already decided that if we should fail, we will definitely try again in the Central Allocation Phase and subsequently thereafter.
XXX is currently studying in the whole day upper class of XXX Kindergarten. He/She enjoys reading and music very much. Our son/daughter is honest, independent and has a bright character, with a strong sense of curiosity which we encourage. He/She has won school awards for School Competition of English Chirography, Chinese Chirography and other competitions in the school.
In order to balance XXX’s developments, he/she attends Piano Course in Tom Lee Music and English Phonics Course in Bauhinia Association. We also often bring him/her to family activities organized by the community organizations, the school and our family in order to broaden his/her horizon and to encourage his/her independent thinking.
We would be appreciated if we could be given an interview (anytime) with the Principal for further clarification and we sure that the Principal could obtain a more comprehensive understanding of our son/daughter.
Enclosed, please find a copy of the application form, curriculum vitae and copies of awards, certificates, academic reports and photos for your consideration,
Thank you for your kind attention.
Yours sincerely,
_____________________________
XXXXXX
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發表於 05-6-1 18:32
