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作者: casshum 時間: 15-8-8 21:06 標題: 請問小兒英文作文,grammar是否有錯

Hi, Jack
Sorry about not returning your book yesterday,I was very busy study about the project Miss Chan gave us,so I was in the library all day .I 'll bring it to your house today at 3 o'clock.
Sum

作者: casshum 時間: 15-8-8 21:15

我總覺得grammar 有些怪,但小兒話我(媽媽)不懂英文文法,請大家幫忙修改下thx

作者: nathanwong6681 時間: 15-8-8 21:38

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作者: casshum 時間: 15-8-8 21:49

Thx a l

作者: casshum 時間: 15-8-8 21:49

thx a lot

作者: NCSC9 時間: 15-8-8 22:10 標題: 引用：+++Sorry+for+not+returning+your+book+yes

原帖由 nathanwong6681 於 15-08-08 發表
Sorry for not returning your book yesterday,I was very busy with studying about the project which ...

呢段都寫得唔好。'with'是冇需要的。 'which given by' 也是錯。'
had'亦係冇必要。希望有英文高人幫幫忙。

作者: Ocean419 時間: 15-8-8 22:24 標題: 回覆：casshum 的帖子

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Hi Jack，

Sorry about not returning your book yesterday. I was very busy studying the project that Miss Chan gave us and I was in the library all day. I'll bring it to your house today at 3 o'clock.

Sum

作者: 錢錢媽 時間: 15-8-8 22:42 標題: 引用：Hi,+Jack++++++++++++++Sorry+about+not+re

原帖由 casshum 於 15-08-08 發表
Hi, Jack
Sorry about not returning your book yesterday,I was very busy study about the ...

Hi Jack,
I am sorry that I did not return your book to you yesterday. I was very busy studying the project that Miss Chan gave us. I was in the library all day.
I will bring it to your house today at 3 o'clock.

Thanks.
Sum

作者: owennam 時間: 15-8-9 00:45 標題: 回覆：錢錢媽的帖子

Hi Jack, I 'm apologize for not return you the book yestetday. Because I spend one day in library for studying the project from Miss Chan. I will return the book to you at 3 o'clock today, cheers SUM

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