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作者: Hello101 時間: 12-5-10 13:20 標題: 求位信
請問有無英文版求位信sample...置頂的topic 似乎已去唔到。
感激萬分！
作者: Hello101 時間: 12-5-11 11:33
有無人可以幫我...我英文有恨...想有參巧寫得好d...
感激萬分！
作者: smallfoothk 時間: 12-5-11 15:40
求位信(三)
Dear Principal,
Please excuse me for this unexpected letter expressing the eagerness of mine for requesting a seat for my son/daughter in your reputed school.
My son/daughter and I are very much impressed by the education offered by your reputed school which stressed a balanced and all-rounded development of one’s potential.
(school name) is so renowned for its academic and extra-curricular activities standing that most parents would like to have their children educated in such a sounding environment.
I attribute the success solely to the devotion and enthusiasms by the Principal and every members of the school.
I am sure my son/daughter will obtain great benefit if he/she is admitted to your reputed school and follows his/her own initiative in learning and being diligent.
Though he/she might not have done as well as others, he/she is likely to show great progress if some form of enlightenment is given by someone who is a real educationalist.
I would be most grateful if my son/daughter could be given an interview with the Principal so that you may obtain a more comprehensive understanding of my son/daughter.
Copies of my son/daughter’s school reports, certificates and testimonials are enclosed for your consideration.
Should anything be missing, I can be reached at 12345678 for clarification.
Regards,
Yours truly,
XXXXXXXXXXX
作者: kwongck 時間: 12-5-11 22:01
本帖最後由 kwongck 於 12-5-11 22:22 編輯
Hello101 發表於 12-5-11 11:33 
有無人可以幫我...我英文有恨...想有參巧寫得好d...
感激萬分！
英文信未必好D或高級D！文筆好的手寫中文信肯定不會遜色於一般的英文信！我認為寫信切忌找襲、自大，賣弄花巧文字及做作，要真誠有禮，言簡意賅說出為何你喜歡此中學及兒女的特質及強項，字裏行間能流露出父母的愛及教養則更好。每個小朋友背景不同，沒有一封信適合全世界的人。
沒有校長喜歡看千篇一律的樣版信！
作者: ohnono 時間: 12-5-12 12:36
我都覺得不論英文或中文，最緊要表達到你想做乜就得。況且好與唔好唔會直接影響子女入學的機會。
若英文有"恨"的你又怎可能徹底和暢快地跟校長談心呢！用回自己最熟識的語言文字來表達自己的情懷係最自然流露和更容易打動校長。
以下所講的雖然係小學的叩門問題，看看有甚麼得著。
明報 – 2011年6月3日星期五上午5:46
油蔴地天主教小學 （海泓道）校長何綺霞說，家長不願放過任何機會，連叩門信的內容亦五花八門，「包括心聲、生活點滴、教育政策甚至回應我在學校網頁上發表的文章，當我是朋友互相交流」，另外有學生個人檔案是以影片、錄音帶等形式遞交，學校會登記每份資料作日後收生參考。
至於寫信與校長「談心」能否為子女博得一個學位，何綺霞表示將以面試表現決定是否取錄學生，「不過在同分情况下，我記得名的學生自然着數一點」。
作者: cellon 時間: 12-5-12 18:59
Hello101 發表於 12-5-10 13:20
請問有無英文版求位信sample...置頂的topic 似乎已去唔到。
感激萬分！ ...
如果對寫英文信沒信心，為什麼不寫中文呢？
作者: phoebepanpan 時間: 12-5-13 09:45 標題: 回覆：求位信
如叩英文直資，中文書也可行嗎
作者: cellon 時間: 12-5-13 16:22
phoebepanpan 發表於 12-5-13 09:45
如叩英文直資，中文書也可行嗎
作者: Hello101 時間: 12-5-14 11:59
多謝各位意見。範文只會用作參考，不會抄襲！謝謝！
作者: Low 時間: 12-6-5 15:36
我的英文寫作也是有限公司, 我朋友介紹了一個編輯朋友幫手改好D, 遞信時, 信心大好多.
作者: Low 時間: 12-6-5 15:38
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我的英文寫作也是有限公司, 我朋友介紹了一個編輯朋友幫手改好D, 遞信時, 信心大好多
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