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作者: 亞迎    時間: 09-7-3 13:42     標題: 英文句子有無錯?

Mr Lee put away his hat on the ground.

The monkeys also put away their hats on the ground.

Mr Lee get back their hats on the hand and go away./ Mr Lee get back the hats on the hand and go away.
我想知道tense有無錯
作者: mamimeowmeow    時間: 09-7-4 17:13

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作者: Shamuslau    時間: 09-7-16 18:06

Other than tenses which mamimeow has already corrected it, I have some comments on the wordings of the sentences.
It depends on what you want to say, but "put away" has a meaning of putting it aside for storage or discarding. So, you might want to skip the "away", i.e. Mr. Lee puts his hat on the ground.
And the last sentence, do you mean Mr. Lee picks up his hat from the ground/floor and goes away.




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